There is hope and I repost this piece in an effort to convince others that this is true. This has nothing whatever to do with the corona virus, by the way. It is simply a timely reminder,
I meet on a regular basis with a good friend who still teaches at the university where I taught for 37 years. He teaches English and was talking about a remarkable paper written by one of his students in a Freshman Composition class. The student is a high school student taking college classes in order to reduce the time and money spent in college later on. It’s a program that Minnesota has had in place for many years now and some of our best students have been those kids who are still in high school. In any event, the paper this student wrote was so remarkable that I asked for a copy and read it with astonishment. The assignment was to go to the library, take any magazine and write what most impressed the student about that particular publication. The idea was to (a) teach the students where the library is, (b) have them read a magazine and (c) test their observational and writing skills. This student picked the National Geographic. (S)he decided to compare and contrast recent copies with several written years before — as early as 1915.
The student was impressed with the great difference between the older version of the magazine and more recent issues. (S)he compared the length of the articles and was struck by their simplicity and brevity. As (s)he noted “Fewer words and more pictures.” (S)he then went through two articles, both on Armenia as it happens, in the two publications — word by word! After the more recent article, (s)he concluded:
“This passage contains ninety-six words, four sentences, nine commas, two colons, one pair of quotation marks, and one pair of dashes.”
(S)he then contrasted this with an older article on the same topic and noted that:
“This passage has 146 words, four sentences, twenty-two commas, two semi-colons, and a pair of dashes. There are four lists, if groups of adjectives are not counted, and there are even instances of figurative language present in the older article that are not found in the newer one. On average, there are 4.67 letters per word in the first [newer] passage and 1.39 syllables. This is significantly different from the 5.58 letters per word in the second [older] excerpt, and the 2.26 syllables. We are simpler now than we were before. . .”
Needless to say, after this remarkable study of the particulars in the two articles he was eager to draw conclusions — as you can see from their final comment. But (s)he shores up that conclusion with further evidence. At the very end of his paper (s)he contrasts two passages from literature, a short story by Conan Doyle and another current one by Stephanie Meyer. The conclusion is worth pondering:
“These passages both describe characters that the protagonist is meeting for the first time. The descriptions, however, are barely comparable. Meyer is vague and barely scratches the surface of the characters, while Doyle goes in depth about his character. Meyer uses sentence fragments in her writing, while Doyle uses comprehensive sentences. The styles are not simply 2000s writing against 1910s writing; there is more to the differences than that. People do not want to read the older literature on the grounds that it is ‘too hard,’ it takes effort and time to truly comprehend Doyle’s work, where anyone could understand what Meyer writes about.”
I would also note the shrunken vocabularies and diminished imaginations of those who still read and write — a number that also seems to be shrinking.
It is possible that this student is writing what his professor wants him or her to say (students tend to do that) or even that (s)he pilfered this article from the net. But that would all be sour grapes. I prefer to think that this young person has a good head on his or her shoulders and not only writes well but also thinks well. I realize, of course, as does my friend, that this student is one of those few that have slipped between the cracks of a decaying educational system. This is why we were so excited. So many of their peers in colleges all around this country prefer the picture books and the short paragraphs that demand no intellectual effort whatever. Reading, writing, and thinking have become passé. They are so analogue, so we hear.
This explains the growing popularity of a demagogue who uses small words, twists the truth around his tiny fingers, makes vapid promises he cannot possibly keep, and seems, contrary to Lincoln, capable of fooling a great many people most, if not all, the time. Still, it is delightful to read such a paper and to know that there is hope if young people such as this manage to work their way to the top and have a say about the future of this country and our besieged planet.
As someone who used to teach in the English department of this same U, I would say that one of the factors to take into considerations is that PSEO (or whatever they are calling the program now that allows high school students to take college classes) often draws the brightest of the bright. And this student is obviously one of them. Thank you for sharing portions of the paper with us. I would be interested to know if one of the reasons why the National Geographic is using fewer words is that they are finding and using more remarkable photographs from around the world, thus less space for words? I don’t know the other short story writer that the writer compared to Conan Doyle, but I’m not surprised. Lately I’ve been reading many “best-sellers” that land in my Little Free Library now that libraries are closed and only find an occasional one that I would label “literature.” Thanks for the thought-provoking post.
No problem.I suspected you would know exactly what I was talking about!
Thanks for sharing this. Writing well is a lost art. By the way, on Jeopardy this week, the final Jeopardy question to the answer he said democracies and the press die at the same time? Who is Joseph Pulitzer? I thought that was fitting.
Seemingly wise. But there haven’t been many democracies and, to my knowledge, Athens (which was democratic) had no free press.